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Cherry Blossoms Blooming
Cherry Blossom's Forming
Chapter 1
The Cherry Tree In the town next to hers a fight was spreading. Her family has to escape before the Alera's (enemy Soldiers) spread into their town. Her mother and Father are both away. Far, far away, they are 6 towns away oblivious to the attack forming. She picks a Cherry Blossom off the tree hoping that it will give her a sign, answer, hope. Yet none come out of it. She picks the petals one by one saying,
I'll live
I'll die
I'll live
I'll die
She doesn't want to continue, nor rest her fate in picking flower petals. She jumps off the tree and lands on the ground with a thump. She walks quietly back to the house, listening for any moment other than hers, Nothing. She start to run when something jumps out in front of her and makes her trip landing strait on her face.
"Oh my gosh! I'm sorry Kylie!" it was her good friend Zonta
Groaning " Hi Zonta, What do you want?"
"I need to tell you something and its serous, top secret! No one but us can know" he says in a hushed tone.
"Make it quick. I need to pack."
"Why?" he asked surprised
"Because, The Alera's are almost next door. I'm not going to stay here and die!"
"Can I come with you?"
"Why? Aren't you safe?"
"No, how about I tell you what I need too inside. I'll help you pack."
"Okay." I say greatly
Then they walk back to the house in silence.
Chapter 2
Packing
As she steps into the house and enters the kitchen she realizes she forgot her shoes by the cherry tree. She quickly turns around and starts to run when she collides with Zonta.Toppling on top of him he hits his head onto the ground and lucky for him he lands in a pile of mud. As Kylie scrambles to stand up Zonta still lays on the ground not moving. She decides that she will quickly run back to the cherry tree to grab her shoes and then run back.
Picking up speed running though the short cut obviously it makes the run shorter but more painful. There are thorn bushes everywhere you step. They grow on the ground making it's way though the running lain. When Kylie steps on one she yelps.
"Ow!" She screeches and falls to the ground only minutes away from the tree. She starts to craw but then one goes into her hand. She keeps going.
Running back to the house in her shoes makes it easier. When she gets to her house she sees muddy foot prints leading into her house. She follows then into her room. When she looks onto. On her bed she sees Zonta laying on the bed sleeping. She quietly walks over and checks to see if hes breathing, He is. She walks back into the family room and lays on the sofa. Then drifts off to sleep.
Chapter 3
Marching
When she wakes up she finds herself in a chamber with Zonta on the other side. She feels dizzy as she tries to stand up. As she walks over to Zonta she bumps into a wall. She looks around to where she bumped into and sees nothing and tries again
*bump*
Confused she puts her hand up and touches the invisible wall. Shocked she starts to hit it trying to get though. She looks around for any windows but see's none. She looks back at Zonta as a tear rolls down her cheek. She goes back to the corner and starts to cry. But at the same time she feels something strong inside her.
A few hours later she awakes to a low loud voice. She looks up to see a Soldier in full uniform next to her.
"Get up." he says
Kylie gets up and walks to the door. Before she leaves she sneaks a peak at Zonta and he gone.
Walking though a dark tunnel she knows she's in one of the Alera's hide outs. Looking around franticly for a way to escape later when the guard says,
"Don't think about escaping Kylie, if you try you will die. Pitty isn't it?" he smirks and walks on.
Still she looks around. Then gains confidence and asks,
"Where am I?" she says in a tiny voice.
"You are... In a tunnel. If you wish to know more you will answer some of our questions" the soldier says loudly
"Oh..."
The guard opens to door and sun light floods in. She squints letting her eyes adjust to the light. She looks up into the
light. She sees a bridge that leads to another mountain and under nether she only sees mist. The guard says,
"Walk on."
"How?" I say
"Simple, Go outside and go on the bridge and walk. I will wait here. Oh and try to jump, when you hit the ground you'll be a pancake."
I step into the light and walk to the bridge.
Chapter 4
Mountain Top
I hate heights, especially ones that are too high to see the ground. I put one foot on the bridge and look back at the guard, he just stairs strait. I put the other foot on, my whole body is trembling, the bridge is shaking. I continue my way across but I'm going very slow. As I get closer to the other side I see a figure forming. It looks like another guard but its not, Its Zonta! I start to fast walk over but almost fall. I'm so close to the other side when I hear a string snap. I look back and see the whole bridge falling. I tremble and run across but its too late. I loose the bridge under my feet and fall into thin air. I grab the bridge.Once it has completely fallen I look up to see oh fare i fell. I can still see the cliff. Zonta is looking down to me. I start yelling,
"Zonta! Help me! Get a guard or someone!"
But he just stairs down. Then he disappears and I am left to dangle on my own.
A couple hours later I here yelling and movement. I open my eyes to see yet again Zonta hagging on a extension rope. I look up again and see another shadowy figure. Then Zonta says,
"Are you coming or not?"
I grab onto him as the rope goes up. I see he's wearing a uniform the same as the old guard. I ask then,
"What happened to you and where have you been? And what are you wearing?"
he doesn't respond right away but then says, " Since we have a long way up I will explain"
"Thanks." I say
"Okay well what happened was while you were sleeping two guard came in and made me walk across the bridge too. Then they took me to a room and told me to get on this uniform. They said they'd explain everything when you got here."
"But why did that guard cut the rope?"
"I'm not sure."
Once they reached the top Zonta set Kylie down and resumed his post. He gave her a signal to walk and then focused on the surroundings.
Then two Alera's took her to a room and locked her up yet again. Then poisoned her food with a sleeping pill. After three minutes she fell asleep, Dreaming of a perfect life with a whole family and no worries. She slept like that for what seemed like forever.
Chapter 5
Inside Magic
Dear readers,
I an currently putting Cherry Blossoms Forming on hold. I am very busy and have not gotten any time to write.
Sorry,
Littledollar96
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Hope you liked it! I'll be making another chapter soon!
Post you vote here!
~ Good,good. I liked it! Considering i know who wrote this, its really good for someone who doesn't read manga! Keep up the good work!~sharingan6
Thanks bud!
~Uhh...second chapter was a little to fast. You need to slow down, explain how Zonta fell. I started reading the beginning of Chapter 2, following it. Then i lost you at the middle cause you went too fast. Readers lose a story when it isn't written well, I'm not saying its bad, just slow it down.~Sharingan6
I'll Try harder. thanks for the advise.
~Nice story but you cannot use the name nirvana its a band name already copyright so to save you some ducks change the name. \+/sasori\+/
~You could name yours Sakura Tree Forming because sakura means cherry tree in Japanese
Thanks but I like the title as it is.
~The book is very interesting, but they need to be a little more descriptive. If you understand what i am saying. ~Sasuke007
yes i know what your saying. Where would you like me to put in more detail?
~Yes!
~No idiot where! Stupid. Oh and every1 plez pick a comment color and that will be urs mines green!
\+/sasori\+/
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