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Chapter 1
Aqua Belts!
I stood at the foot of my bed, my aqua belt shining a dark blue. That means i was at a low skill level. You see, an aqua belt is the symbol of my village.
It is all shades of blue(for the water.)The Darker shade it is the less skill a person has, the lighter it is the more powerful you are. We live on the water, in the middle of the blue ocean. Everything is either floating on the water or drilled into the ground by the creator hundreds of years ago.
I learned that in the academy( where we learn to control the water), before i inherited the power of the Spirit of the Sea. It is the beast that dwells under the ocean, it gives everyone strength, thats why we are extremely hard to defeat in battle. Old legends tell that the Spirit of the Sea is a sea dragon, but not many believe them.
You might think that having the power of a Spirit inside you may sound frightful(because all Aquarians know the wrath of the Spirit of the sea)
but its not!Everyone likes me now, I used to be the runt of the village, born by the poorest parents( don't worry, my parents are higher in the ranks, you know why...there son is the Spirit of th Sea!). I walk down the dock, wondering what I was going to learn today, when Asari came running up to me with her books flying all over the place. " Kaiyou, wait up!!" she said . She tripped on her sandal and fell on the ground. I helped her pick up her books, then she expertly balanced them on one hand.
" How are you doing today?" I say
" Oh, I'm fine.'' she replies.
Together we walked through the door of the Academy, thinking of what we were going to do in the afternoon...

Chapter2
Like always, academy was boring. The sensei talked, and talked, and talked. I thought my brain was going to burst. "So you see, BLAH BLA BLAH, BLA BLA, BLAH BLAH BLA BLAH BLA BLAH?"
"Huh, what?" I said. The sensei asked me something i didn't know, everyone laughed. That matter anymore, if the sensei didn't have a prison warden voice maybe I'd listen more. But i would never say that to the sensei, all that asks for is trouble with a capital T. I mean why would anybody want to listen to a person who's SO boring, that their brains (like i said before) would burst out of their skulls. Really makes you think why they wont let you choose who you want to be taught by. Like for me I would choose my grandfather, he's really smart, and fought in the great nation war! Its the war that almost brought The Aquarians to its knee's! But, thats all behind us now.That was basically the whole day! I walked home with asari, and she went a different road and i went the opposite way.
All was quite as everyone prepared to go to bed. I lay down on my cot, and pull the blankets over me. I think of what happened today, same old, same old. With the warmth of the blanket, a started to sway. I closed my eyes and went to sleep. My eyes Shot open, only then to here an explosion..............
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Chapter 3
I burst though my front door. Asari was running down the street souting to me, I started running towards her too. Then a figure appeared behind her, swooping i knife in the air! "Look out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I chucked a knife at the figure, He was hit square in the jaw! She sprinted and almost ran into me. "The village is being attacked!" she gasped. I took her hand and started rushing her through the crowds of screaming people. Then, there was another explosion! Everyone stopped and look at the sacred Temple go up in flames!!! " Oh no..." I said.
We rushed through everyone, pushing ,shoving. We were trying to get to the main port on the east side of the village and we were almost there. A foot swung under my legs and Asari's grip left me, i was pinned to the back of a building by an enemy warrior. He.....wait, SHE pressed a knife to my neck. "Where is the sacred scroll, Rat!" Thank god i listened in survival class. "Hmm, i don't know what exactly what you mean?..." Don't tell anything truthfully unless it values your life, don't do much of the talking(stay close to 2 to 3 words), Always think ahead of the enemy. If i stick to those rules, i won't die.
" I said, where is the sacred scroll!!!!!???" she repeated in a harsh voice.
"Uh...uhhhhh...." but as if by miracle, Asari was sneaking up behind her.
" Well...i don't know where its not, but i do know where its isent ..." I stalled.
" So you know where it is?" she questioned. " Well... i do know where its not being held, 'cause its the opposite where it is...but i don't know where its not truthfully, actually, really isn't..." I stated. Just a few more steps.....
" What the hack are you saying, or is it that......." she inquired. She smiled, she spun around throwing her knife at Asari, asari dodged it. YES! She left an opening, i took her arm twisted it it backwards and put her into a headlock.
"One move and ill break your arm, how good of a warrior are you going to be with a broken arm eh?" I said. She smiled again. "Crap, i left an opening didn't I?" She swung her foot back and kicked me in the chin. " OOOOWWWWW!!!!!!" I screamed. She laughed and disappeared. Last thing i saw was Asari crouching over me....fading...fading.....
I hope you liked it!!!!Stay tuned for the next chapter!~Sharingan6
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LittleDollar96~ Amazing. I think these two paragraphs have alot of detail. Is anyone allowed to add to the story? Of course you can! But the rules say you cant continue someone else's story, you have to draw a line separating at the beginning of you story and at the end!
Sasori+~ its alright but i really don't think it will be a smash and the beginning is boring but good vocab
Thank you sasori, that really makes me happy! -_-...
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